The Substitute Guest by Grace Livingstone Hill (November 7-9, 2005)



I don't think I've ever read another book quite like this one. On amazon, it's classified as Christian Romance, and I read it since it was selected for a book club I'm part of. Written in 1933, The Substitute Guest started out as an adventure type story, which then turned into a narrative of Christmas, hinted at romance, then went to themes of Christianity and conversion, then went the route of suspense crime/defeating evil and then back to romance.

The story begins when Alan Monteith goes on a last minute Christmas Eve errand to deliver a critical medication to a woman in need, for his friend, a doctor, who is going on vacation. Alan has a difficult time and loses his way in a dangerous snowstorm, and meets the Devereaux family, which includes the devout Mother and Father Devereaux, and their children, Daryl (a girl) and Lance. Daryl is involved with a young man named Harold that the whole family has misgivings about. Lance loves the sweet young Ruth, another visitor at the home. Lance joins Alan on the dangerous expedition, and the pair successfully deliver the medicine. Afterwards, Alan has the first sincere Christmas experience since his mother died, and wonders what his city life is missing. He especially wonders why he is involved with a woman like Demeter Cass, when girls like Daryl exist in the world. Much of the later plot revolves around the romance between Daryl and Alan.

Grace Livingston Hill switches vantage points at many times as she tells the story, sometimes focusing on Alan, other times Demeter or the Devereauxs. The overall result is very soap-opera-esque, only with a much smaller cast of characters. I think the somewhat weird names (Daryl and Demeter!) had something to do with my evaluation too.

I thought the story was good, but at times the dialogue was very stilted and unnatural. For me, that took away from the book. I expected Grace Livingston Hill might be like L.M. Montgomery, but she didn't have much humor, at least not in this book. The parts that amused me the most were when the negligee-glad Demeter tried to caress Alan into a life of crime for her (definitely soapy there!), and Alan tells her to stop the petting party! I also was glad when Harold was sent off. heh. Harold and Demeter should have met in the end and gotten married. Alan and Daryl took a ridiculous amount of time to figure out they liked one another, but it was all a happy ending in the end.


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